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Preview: Advent Comic pg 4

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I'm unsure of this one so I wanted opinions before I begin Sketchbooking this as an official page.

I DID Number them 1-4 *hopefully you can see* ><

Like my latest journal Here mentions, I'm trying to replace the 14 pages I lost in my Advent Notebook. So If you have any opinions don't hesitate to write them ON THAT JOURNAL.

Summary: Someone is waking up, to a blabber mouthing hedgehog and got a nice Kiba Flash. *based of this here [link] And is hinting a "Female" intruder in the lab.

PS: if you can't read these then gladly ask below. It's a notebook preview, meaning more improvements.
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Looking good! Without the numbers, it would be confusing telling which order these events are supposed to happen, but what you have here is great. Kenji waking up and hearing that... well, that would unsettle anyone, you can't really blame him for cutting down Hedgeshock like that! You did an especially good job with her; I know you were dreading drawing her a bit, but the line going through her like that really shows just how hard she's been cut in half. Love that arm just falling off there, and for a Pseudoroid such with little expression/face, you've drawn her looking shocked so well.